Subway Feature Drafts - Commentary

I am pleased with the way my subway design has progressed since my brainstorming ideas and the first draft. The copy changed quite a bit, which actually allowed for better design. The two sidebars were a nice addition to both the copy and the design. In the bottom draft posted here, Kristin suggested that I make the sub shapes more obvious. Before I set out to make this revision, I thought it would look cheesy, but I am actually happy with the way it turned out. I included a detail image of the update "sub" subheads - I think they are a great improvement. It just goes to show you that someone else's eyes and ideas can make all the difference in your design. Thanks to Kristin and the art crew for the comments.